Another Description Help
Okay, I have three hair pins I am wanting to upload as seperate listings. I need to be sure that each is represented correctly. I did this as set originally and decided against. How would you rearrange the words for each one..
Original description:
This three piece Rhinestone Valentine Feather Hair Pin Set includes:
one pink heart rhinestone feather hair pin
one purple heart rhinestone feather hair pin
one white heart rhinestone feather hair pin
each approximately 2 1/2 inch long (do I really need to state the measurement?)
This rhinestone sweetheart valentine feather hair piece set was designed for that woman in mind that doesn't like a big hair accessories but still wants the flare, grace, elegance, hollywood, burlesque hair rhinestone feather acessories. (way too long).
Perfect for the office or work place, engagments like weddings/renewing of vows cermonies, regilious functions like St. Valentines Day Mass / service, father daughter dances, romantic getaway vacations, birthday or anniversary celebrations but still wants the flare, grace, elegance, hollywood, burlesque hair rhinestone feather acessories. (should I just list each engagement that it is good for?)
Inspired by the old hollywood days of rhinestone and feathers but with the compactibility of smallness for travel.
This is the perfect set for your valentine even if you are your own valentine.
*I know arylric is spelled wrong above did I forget to mention spelling is not one of attributes*
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Permalink Reply by Beautifulswagstore on -
just made the suggested changes and listed the other pins as individual sale items
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Permalink Reply by strawberryfieldsArtJewelryBeadsn on -
Beautiful! Just one minor change of sequence - put this:
"You will receive a similar hair pin. The use of organic, died feathers makes each hair pin a unique work of art as no two feathers are alike. Images 3 & 4 are additional examples of how your unique Pink hair pin may look based upon the various shapes of feathers available."
Before this:
"Also available in purple and white. Follow the links below for ordering other colors:
Purple:http://www.zibbet.com/BeautifulSwagStore/artwork?artworkId=714621
White:
http://www.zibbet.com/BeautifulSwagStore/artwork?artworkId=714574 "and your done! ;-)
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Permalink Reply by D & P Creations on -
I'm confused. Is this for one hair pin or a set of three? The picture shows 3, yet the initial explanation indicates separated items. And the description is too wordy; it should show specifications and what it does for the user.
Much more important than descriptions are images of the product, including details and how it enhances the hair.
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Permalink Reply by Beautifulswagstore on
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I have those three that need seperate listings.
I got as close as I could without bluring the photos..i will try for more photos later this week.
The pink one is already listed here www.zibbet.com/beautifulswagstore
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